Journal Assignment #4
Descriptive Writing Assignment
Using Ann Hodgman’s essay as a model, write a detailed description of a recent meal that you ate. Your focus should be on describing as many aspects of your food as you can.
Important Elements: Concrete/Abstract Images
Multi-Sensory Images Simile, Metaphor, Analogy
Dominant Impression
That moment when your mouth is completely satisfied and no other hot and appetizing spice could ever compare to this outer body experience. Whenever a waiter serves Bang Bang Shrimp to one of the lucky customers everyone in the room can smell the sharp but enticing effect of the seasoning surrounding the shrimp. Your ears can hear the slight crunch of the breading that is then filled with flavor and delight. When eating bang bang shrimp it is like a burst of flavor has exploded into your mouth and always leaves you wanting more. The appetizer is so satisfying that your mind, stomach, and mouth will be filled and never want anything else again. The sweet chili sauce mixed with a slight touch of hot chili sauce will induce your senses making it impossible to resist. Everyone likes the taste of shrimp but after adding all the ingredients to form the bang bang your whole body will forever love this appetizer. The shrimp is described as delightfully small and perfect for a bite size appetizer covered in a citrus and zesty flavoring that will draw your eyes and mouth in until you feel as if you cannot live without eating this delicious appetizer.
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